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  • “Blue Moon,” and the Love of Language

    November 23rd, 2025

    A couple of us went to see Blue Moon Friday night. If you’ve not heard of this movie, it is inspired by the letters between Lorenz “Larry” Hart and the object of his late-in-life affection, Elizabeth Weiland. Hart, for those unfamiliar with the name, was the first principal writing partner of Richard Rodgers, before Oscar Hammerstein entered the picture. Rodgers and Hart write some pretty big musicals back in the early decades of the twentieth century, Babes in Arms and Pal Joey being perhaps the most famous. But Hart was a troubled soul, and years of drinking coupled with bouts of depression made him an unreliable writing partner. Which is when Hammerstein stepped in. The film takes place on a single night, unfolding in realtime at Sardi’s, the famous Manhattan bar where the Broadway stars would gather after their shows. (Still do.) The fateful night in question is the opening of Rodgers and Hammerstein’s first collaboration, and enormous hit, Oklahoma! And of course, Rodgers and Hammerstein would go on to be the most successful duo in Broadway history, with classics like The King & I, and The Sound of Music.

    We follow Larry Hart as he arrives at Sardi’s early, full of piss and vinegar about this new musical, unable to hide his disdain for the writing, at least until Rodgers and Hammerstein and entourage arrive in a swirl of merry noise and telegrams wiring in about how much the critics are talking about it. He vacillates between jealousy, desperation, egotism, and love-sickness in a way that is, for the audience, at times hilarious, at times painful to watch, and never not riveting.

    This may seem a long-winded preamble to what I really want to say, to what I really loved about the film. For while it’s well-imagined screenplay of conversations that may or may not have happened, and it may be a tour de force performance from Ethan Hawk as Lorenz Hart, the thing I loved the most about the film is how much it loved language.

    Hart, in the beginning section of the film (if thirty minutes in can still be considered “the beginning” is talking to Eddie the bartender about the language of Oklahoma!, laying down a diatribe about how absurd the first lines of the opening number are. For those who don’t know, the opening number is “Oh, What a Beautiful Morning”, and the line in question is “The corn is as high / as a elephant’s eye”. Hart is borderline vitriolic about the comparison, for what would be the odds that an elephant would be loose on the Great Plains, hiding in the cornfields? He even goes so far as to question the title, and the use of an exclamation point, often referring to the musical as “Oklahoma exclamation point”.

    In another sequence, he’s talking with Andy White. “Andy” was the nickname of E.B. White, as only his friends knew. White, by this time a well-established writer for the New Yorker, happens to be in Sardi’s, and Hart, in his usual display of frenetic dialog and uninhibited honesty, sits with White and discusses the language. In moments where Hart’s words are racing ahead of his brain and he stumbles looking for the right noun, verb, or adjective, White always manages to quietly, humbly provide the best choice.

    I loved how “Blue Moon” focused, in part, on Hart’s love of language, how it drove him to write such memorable songs as “My Funny Valentine,” “The Lady Is a Tramp,” and, well, “Blue Moon.” But it’s not just Hart in love with the language. The film’s screenplay writer shows just as much love. In a quieter moment, after White confesses non-fiction has burnt him out and he’s trying to write a children’s novel, Hart relays a story about a mouse he catches in his kitchen every morning and releases into the park every day. And the next morning, the mouse is back in the kitchen. He’s even given it a name. Stuart. White considers this for a moment, then asks “With a U, or a W?”

    It’s little moments like this that struck me and even now, two days later, I’m still thinking about it. And admiring it.

  • New Fiction Up at “The Yard: Crime Blog”

    November 16th, 2025

    I’m a bit behind on a lot of things, but I did want to say I am very happy to announce that my flash fiction piece “The Boys of Summer” was accepted and posted by “The Yard: Crime Blog” in late October!

    You can read it here: https://theyardcrimeblog.com/2025/10/19/the-boys-of-summer-flash-fiction/

  • Crime Bake 2025

    November 10th, 2025

    I’m going back to old-school blogging for a moment to talk about Crime Bake 2025, from which I returned yesterday. I’ll say up front that I had a great time and met quite a few people I didn’t know or had only known on the periphery of the New England crime writing community. I’ll also add the disclaimer that I am on the Crime Bake committee, so I’m going to be a little bit biased.

    The Guest of Honor this year with Lori Rader-Day, and she was fabulous. Like Gabino Iglesias the year before, she was friendly, affable, approachable, down-to-earth, and honored to be there. I actually got the chance to speak to her one-on-one for a bit at the banquet, and she was lovely.

    Being on the committee, I didn’t get the chance to attend maybe all of the panels I would have liked to. Especially since I was moderating one of them.

    I was asked to moderate the Civic Duty: Writing About Social Issues panel. It can be a heavy topic, and certainly there were some heavy moments when the panelists were answering. But we had a terrific group of panelists (Richie Narvaez, Jeff Markowitz, and Courtney Denelle), and they were open and honest about their experiences and how they approach the craft of writing when it comes to folding social issues into their fiction. We heard some really great things from those who attended (to which I felt extremely relieved–this was my first time moderating a panel!).

    The banquet was later that night, and aside from a few hiccups, it went smoothly. And then attendance remained pretty high for the Sunday morning non-fiction authors/experts, which is saying quite a lot considering there are plains and trains to catch.

    A few personal highlights for me:

    • I finally got the chance to meet Sara, my editor for The Last Line in person. It was so lovey to meet her and catch up on the last year.
    • Back in March I helped run a writing retreat in Orange, MA. It involved providing some prompts and some writing time. Basically, I would show several images of places and characters and give the group fifteen minutes to write. Then I would pause them, show them images of various “things”, and give them another fifteen minutes, the idea being they must now fold the “thing” into whatever they were writing. One of the participants attended Crime Bake for the first time this year and told me that she continued what she had started using my prompts, and that it was the first time she finished writing a full-length novel. That made me warm and fuzzy.

    The number of first time attendees this year was significant, which was a great improvement over last year. And the best story of attendance we heard was about an online writing group that is spread over at least two continents. They had wanted to meet in person, and they chose Crime Bake to do it! One came from as far away as Oregon and another from London, England.

    We heard a number of times that this was the best Crime Bake in a number of years, and I’m very proud to have been able to be a part of planning it. Kick-off for planning 2026 is in December, and I’m already thinking through ideas for programming and the banquet.

  • Four Years and Counting…

    April 6th, 2024

    Seemingly out of nowhere, it hit me a few weeks ago: I’ve been home for four years. In the middle of March, 2020, my job sent us all home with the expectation we’d only be working from home for a few weeks, maybe a few months. And while we’re able now to return to the office without fear of infection, most of us, including myself, were given the option to continue to work from home. Which I have.

    I wanted to do a post about that, but I couldn’t figure out how to write it. How do you celebrate such a milestone when what kicked it all off was fear and doubt and worry about what the future would look like? Do I write about what a disaster it was for, well, everyone? The toll it took on us all, especially our kids? Or do I write about the good things that came out of it? The technology that let so many of us work from home and not be completely cut off from society? How, in some ways, some of our relationships grew closer than they would have if we hadn’t been forced to it?

    COVID was a mess. There’s no doubt about that. It disrupted lives, upended how we live, how we shop, how we think about everything from vaccines to masks to handwashing, and so much more. It came with a terrible human toll, both in lives lost and in our mental health. I hated hated hated it, and hope we never have to go through something like it every again.

    And yet, there are a few things that I will always remember as the good in the middle of the terrible, the eye in the center of the hurricane. Our small friend-pod of five that met every Friday night, outside, on the patio, distanced, yet together. Family TV every night after diner, where we would all sit around and watch a few episodes of some series we were working our way through, making a point of eating dessert while we watched. At two episodes per night, we watched (or rewatched, for some of us) all of Psych, Schitt’s Creek, and Brooklyn Nine-Nine. Running a T-shirt contest on Facebook as a way of connecting with a large group of people and coming up with new ways to reveal the winner. Adding our beagle, Hank, to the family (though, to be fair, our other dog, Harper, may not have seen this as such a good thing…).

    Looking back on four years ago, at the beginning of the unknown, I can still feel an almost visceral degree of dread. There was such a high degree of the uncertainty. Four years later, like an audience member watching a historical docudrama unfold on the History Channel, we know how it ends. But four years ago, we had no idea. No idea when a vaccine would be available. No idea if we would ever have face-to-face interactions again. No idea if we would ever get to stop using Clorox wipes on all of our groceries. The tingling feeling I get in the tips of my fingers brings that fear of the unknown back quick and sharp.

    To a degree I guess I don’t know what I’m trying to say, other than the fact that I’m grateful. I think back on those early days, and I’m grateful that we in this house made it through, grateful that, push comes to shove, I know we can survive it again if we have to.

    (But let’s try to avoid another pandemic, okay?)

  • THE LAST LINE GoodReads Giveaway!

    February 20th, 2024

    I’m very excited to announce Crooked Lane Books is running a GoodReads Giveaway for THE LAST LINE.

    The Giveaway runs until February 25, and it will be for 5 physical copies, US only.

    The winners will get an ARC (advance reader copy) mailed directly to them once the contest ends.

    So enter now at this link and you may get your hands on a physical copy of the book!

  • THE LAST LINE is on NetGalley

    February 4th, 2024

    How would you like to read my book before July? I’m excited to announce the THE LAST LINE is now available on NetGalley!

    What is NetGalley? So glad you asked.

    NetGalley is online service where, if you are a member, you can select a certain number of titles per month to read…and review!Publishers make digital review copies and audiobooks available for the NetGalley community to read and review.

    So, if you want to help me spread the word about my forthcoming book THE LAST LINE and you are a member of NetGalley, please consider giving my book a read and review!

    Here’s the link: https://www.netgalley.com/catalog/book/313305

  • B&N Preorder Sale!

    January 24th, 2024

    Barnes & Noble news! B&N is running a pre-order sale today Jan 24 through Jan 26. Rewards members and Premium Members, can save 25% on my forthcoming book THE LAST LINE. Premium members can save an additional 10%! I mean, that’s 35% off.

    So, how to order? Follow this link to my book and enter PREORDER25 in the coupon code: https://shorturl.at/fquAN

  • Moving Right Along: First Pass Pages

    January 18th, 2024

    Continuing to share my publication journey with you, I can tell you that the “first pass page” edits are done.

    What are “first pass page” edits?

    First pass pages are the first time you get your book back from the publisher typeset in what will be the published format. I received mine as a PDF, which I printed out. Then I popped open the dreaded red pen. . .

    The goal as an author is to go through the book once more and note any last changes you want or need to make. It’s really the last chance you have to edit the book to where you want it.

    Of course, that means reading it again from stem to stern, and there’s always the danger that you don’t read carefully enough because you’re just sick of it at this point, or because you’ve read it so many times you just don’t see the issues anymore.

    But, if you want the best book you can possibly write, this is it. This is the final opportunity to make editorial corrections.

    My final read-through ended up being about eleven pages of notes. Not terrible, all things being equal. Still, it felt like a lot and there’s a natural tendency to worry that you’re just annoying your publisher by passing back all the corrections you think should be made. But they want a successful book as much as you do. So it’s well worth the time to read closely and make changes. Because what comes next is pretty much the book you’ll eventually see on the shelves.

  • Truth in Writing Memes

    December 7th, 2023

    This one hits awfully close to home…

    Cartoon copyright of Asher Perlman
  • Cover Reveal

    November 30th, 2023

    I am so very excited to be able to reveal the cover for my forthcoming book, THE LAST LINE.

    It will be available July 23rd, 2024, but you can pre-order it now.

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